Man on the Edge

The sittuation we have is a man on an hotel´s roof that has lost his job and wife and he wants to jump to end with his life. However a cop is trying to convice him to think back and he shoud keep goin with his like.
The policeman gives a phone to the man and he start to talk with his wife. She told him not to jump even their love is dead, the man lisent his wife carfully he say her goodbye and then thought the phone, he appologise to the cop for doing that ant the he realised he is a failer and choose the easy and coward way.

Global Warming

The Global Warming is a huge problem that nowadays has a great deal of negative effects on the Earth. The tempeture of the planet increases a little bit every year, the Poles are melting and it cause the sea level to rise up, then some beaches will floot. All of this is caused by the pollutiom companies and countries produce, makink a whole on the ozone layer

PEER RESPONSE AND SOLUTION

A solution to Global Warming could be investing more money in charities against the pollution, in new technologies which use solar panels as a sourcw of energy, and using renewable fuel instead of petrol, promoting the use of electric cars, etc. To sum up, looking for new sources of energy that
don´t pollute.

Comparative/Contrast Paragraph

There are alot of differents types of music, and punk and classical music could be the opposite side in a line.  Punk rock is a very move type of music, the lyrics are song shoutting, the main instruments are electric guitars and concertsshould be given in local and darks pub at night. The people who attent or give this concerts are young and rebels, whereas classical music is, in its majority instrumental, an armonychal mix touched by violinist, pianist etc. The concerts are in open spaces or national theatres. The type of people who touched or like tis music shouldbe old.

Iconditional basic income

Personally speaking I reckon that the inconditional basic income is a bad idea for an economy system. Obviouslly as everything, it have a positives aspects as well such as the help to the homeless, however an inconditonal basic income for those who already work hard, to work harder for the benefitof those lazy people who don´t need to work because is enough with the basic income. Althouhg if you can work in whatever you want, those publics works like cleaner or workman won´t have enough people and the most important jobs  will be full of unqualyfire employees. We live in a society based on you recived what you give to the society, so an inconditional basic income will destroy that society. Moreover a basic income shouldn´t be choose because it drives the economy to a desaster. Unfortunatelly the economical prosperity of the country is before the personal happyness

Peer Response

Peer Response:
I think you don´t have a coplete topic sentence, I mean one sentence that introduce your paragraph, the things you´re going to talk about. As soon as I start reading I´ve imagine how your friend is, so this is a good point. Maybe you should write about her physical and then talk about her personality. For example: In your first sentence you talk about her hair and her eyes, in the second one you say she is smart and in the fourth you´re talking again about her body. I like that you have appointed the things you most like of her, I supposed these are things that make you feel comfortable and it´s something important when you are trying to describe someone you like. The last thing I have to say after seeing this is that you should put a concluding sentence, something beautiful about her.

Final text
My best friend is a girl of golden hair and freen eyes. She is skinny but not short to be a girl. She is very smart and always know what to do or say. She is quite loyal aand you can trust on her. I donn´t know how but she is always right, She has always understood me and support when I need it, give me advise and help me when I asked for it. I admire her for her strengh and determination, and I cant imagine my life without her.

A place I would like to visit

A place I would like to visit since I was a child is New York. New York is not exactly an untouched region, in fact it´s a city where more than 8 millions of people live. I´ve been always amazed of New York skyline, but also its beautiful icons and breathtaking sceneries.

New York it´s divided in five districts, Manhattan, Queens, the Bronx, Staten Island and Brooklyn. There are a lot of places to go sightseeing such us Central Park, a huge open space in the middle of Manhattan, the Statue of Liberty , the biggest icon of the city, or Museums like The American Museum of Natural History. New York City is the best place for a keen photographer, there are views like the one on the top of the Empire State Building, Times Square at the sunset or Brooklyn´s bridge that you shouldn´t miss.

New York, specially Wall Street, is the centre of the economical and commercial activities. Another important fact of the city is that here resides the Headquarters of the United Nations . The city also have some of the highest buildings of the world, like the Empire State Building or The Twins Tower, until the September 11 of 2001, when they were knocked down by a terrorist attack. Also a lot of TV series like "Friends" or "How I met Your Mother", and films are set in this city.

New York is one of the most important cities in the world, and even it´s so far away, the flights are not cheap and living there is quite expensive, a find in New York a place you should visit at least once in your life, not only for its popularity but for the grateful experience of the trip as well. 

"El Guernica"

We have to describe the feeling we have when we saw Pablo Piccaso´s picture, "El Guernica"

"El Guernica" describes the horror of the war, whn you see it a feeling of disorder invades you. You almost can hear the people and animals screaming and suffer, the fire and the bombs behind.You feel quite sad because you just can stand there and watch them die.