Iconditional basic income

Personally speaking I reckon that the inconditional basic income is a bad idea for an economy system. Obviouslly as everything, it have a positives aspects as well such as the help to the homeless, however an inconditonal basic income for those who already work hard, to work harder for the benefitof those lazy people who don´t need to work because is enough with the basic income. Althouhg if you can work in whatever you want, those publics works like cleaner or workman won´t have enough people and the most important jobs  will be full of unqualyfire employees. We live in a society based on you recived what you give to the society, so an inconditional basic income will destroy that society. Moreover a basic income shouldn´t be choose because it drives the economy to a desaster. Unfortunatelly the economical prosperity of the country is before the personal happyness

Peer Response

Peer Response:
I think you don´t have a coplete topic sentence, I mean one sentence that introduce your paragraph, the things you´re going to talk about. As soon as I start reading I´ve imagine how your friend is, so this is a good point. Maybe you should write about her physical and then talk about her personality. For example: In your first sentence you talk about her hair and her eyes, in the second one you say she is smart and in the fourth you´re talking again about her body. I like that you have appointed the things you most like of her, I supposed these are things that make you feel comfortable and it´s something important when you are trying to describe someone you like. The last thing I have to say after seeing this is that you should put a concluding sentence, something beautiful about her.

Final text
My best friend is a girl of golden hair and freen eyes. She is skinny but not short to be a girl. She is very smart and always know what to do or say. She is quite loyal aand you can trust on her. I donn´t know how but she is always right, She has always understood me and support when I need it, give me advise and help me when I asked for it. I admire her for her strengh and determination, and I cant imagine my life without her.

A place I would like to visit

A place I would like to visit since I was a child is New York. New York is not exactly an untouched region, in fact it´s a city where more than 8 millions of people live. I´ve been always amazed of New York skyline, but also its beautiful icons and breathtaking sceneries.

New York it´s divided in five districts, Manhattan, Queens, the Bronx, Staten Island and Brooklyn. There are a lot of places to go sightseeing such us Central Park, a huge open space in the middle of Manhattan, the Statue of Liberty , the biggest icon of the city, or Museums like The American Museum of Natural History. New York City is the best place for a keen photographer, there are views like the one on the top of the Empire State Building, Times Square at the sunset or Brooklyn´s bridge that you shouldn´t miss.

New York, specially Wall Street, is the centre of the economical and commercial activities. Another important fact of the city is that here resides the Headquarters of the United Nations . The city also have some of the highest buildings of the world, like the Empire State Building or The Twins Tower, until the September 11 of 2001, when they were knocked down by a terrorist attack. Also a lot of TV series like "Friends" or "How I met Your Mother", and films are set in this city.

New York is one of the most important cities in the world, and even it´s so far away, the flights are not cheap and living there is quite expensive, a find in New York a place you should visit at least once in your life, not only for its popularity but for the grateful experience of the trip as well. 

"El Guernica"

We have to describe the feeling we have when we saw Pablo Piccaso´s picture, "El Guernica"

"El Guernica" describes the horror of the war, whn you see it a feeling of disorder invades you. You almost can hear the people and animals screaming and suffer, the fire and the bombs behind.You feel quite sad because you just can stand there and watch them die.

This week I´m going to talk about my favourite music band, The Beatles:

The Beatles was a popular rock band in the 60´s. The mebers of the band were John Lennon, Paul McCartney, Ringo Starr and George Harrison. They gained a reputation playing in Liverpool´s pubs such as "TheCavern". Their first single was publicated in 1962 with the name of "Love me do". After some successful  tours in Europe and one in USA (1964), they finally decided stop giving concerts and concentrate their activity to the studio. Then, in 1970, after some discrepancies between Lennon and McCartney caused by Lennon,s girlfriend, Yoko Ono, the group broke up was official.

Years later, in 1980, John Lennon was murdered by a crazy fan at his building´s doors in New York. Even George Harrison was also attacked by a fan, he finally dead because of the cancer in 2001. However, McCartney and Starr still alive and active.

The Beatles is one of the most important band is the music´s history. 50 years later their songs still being listned by fans of all ages. Albums as Abbey Road(1969), St,. Pepper Lonely Hearts Club Band (1967) or Yellow Submarine (1969) has influenced several actual bands, and songs like Hey Jude, Yesterday or Help! persist in the memory of millions of people. The Beatles started as a little band of teenagers making the most of every chance they had and finally becomed the most succesful band of all times, they are the prove of dream can become true, but only with a little help of your fiends.